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Sunday, September 22, 2013

Book Review: Sky Jumpers

Want to win a FREE copy of Sky Jumpers?

In the Comment section, write a short entry using the writing prompt "Bomb's Breath". The entry I like best will win a book from the publicist!

Imagine jumping into air that can kill you -- into the Bomb's Breath. Hope Toriella does that for fun, but one day, she'll need to do it to save her town.

Overview: 12 year old Hope lives in White Rock, a town struggling to recover from the green bombs of World War III. The bombs destroyed almost everything that came before, so the skill that matters most in White Rock—sometimes it feels like the only thing that matters—is the ability to invent so that the world can regain some of what it’s lost.

But Hope is terrible at inventing and would much rather sneak off to cliff dive into the Bomb's Breath— the deadly band of air that covers the crater the town lives in— than fail at yet another invention.

When bandits discover that White Rock has invented priceless antibiotics, they invade. The town must choose whether to hand over the medicine and die from disease in the coming months or to die fighting the bandits now. Hope and her friends, Aaren and Brock, might be the only ones who can escape through the Bomb’s Breath and make the dangerous trek over the snow-covered mountain to get help. For once, inventing isn't the answer, but the daring and risk-taking that usually gets Hope into trouble might just save them all. (from Goodreads)

Dawn's Recommendation: 4 of 5 Stars

What I liked: I was immediately drawn in by the interesting world that Peggy Eddleman created. The story takes place in a settlement that contains survivors of the Green Bombs of WWIII (what a cool idea!). Next, I was thrilled that the town values invention and ingenuity as they try to rebuild their lives (I LOVE inventions!).

The characters are likable. Hope Toriella, the MC, is a spunky and courageous 12 year old misfit who finally finds her strengths. Despite obstacles, she is unwilling to give up on her family and her town. I love her tenacity!

The whole book is wholesome and fun and Ms Eddleman has some great conflict that keeps you turning the pages!

And as a writer, I enjoyed how Peggy gave out background and historical information about the past through the MC's history class. That was a really smooth way to do it!

Constructive Critiques: The tone at the beginning seemed too happy and optimistic. Having gone through WWIII just 40 years ago and having bandits, I thought there should be a few ominous tones.

I did have a little bit of a hard time believing that Hope would be able to fight the bandits (and climb trees and jump off cliffs) after her long, exhaustive journey, but I still enjoyed the book.

Overall: The book is adventurous and kids will enjoy reading it! What kids doesn't want to save the day?

And as a parent, I loved the book's themes:

"finding yourself"

"believing in yourself"

"you are special"

Everyone is unique and has special qualities --This is a much needed message for kids today. Each person has something special to give the world. Thank you, Peggy, for weaving this throughout your story!

I look forward to Peggy Eddleman's next book!

Check out other posts on Sky Jumpers' Blog Tour!

September 11^th: Taffy’s Candy
September 12^th: Smack Dab in the Middle
September 13^th: Once Upon a Story
September 14^th: Inky Elbows
September 15^th: Society of Young Inklings
September 16^th: Me, My Shelf & I
September 17^th: Kayla’s Reads and Reviews
September 18^th: The Haunting of Orchid Forsythia
September 19^th: Kid Lit Frenzy
September 19^th: Word Spelunking
September 21^st: The Mod Podge Bookshelf
September 22^nd: The Write Soil
September 23^rd: The Hiding Spot
September 23^rd: Literary Rambles
September 23^rd: Nerdy Book Club
September 24^th: OneFourKidLit

Don't forget to try to win a free copy!

Just write something using the prompt "Bombs Breath".

I'll announce the winner on 9-28-13! Tip: the most unique and creative will be the one to catch my eye!

Thank you to:

NICOLE BANHOLZER

Associate Publicist, Random House Children's Books
for the free giveaway for this post!

Monday, September 16, 2013

Book Review: The Ruby Key

I was eager to read this 1.) because I've read two of Holly Lisle's books and 2.) because I love MG fiction. BLUF: The book was okay, but not as good as I had hoped it would be.

Dawn's Recommendation: 3 of 5 stars

What I liked: I liked the MC Genna (human) and the world where they live in the day and Nightlings (elf-like creatures) rule the night. The interaction with the Nightling Kai-lord (aka bad king) and their deal was pretty cool, as was the quest Genna went on. Even the idea of the moonroads was cool, but...

What I didn't like: It was confusing. I was following along pretty good until Genna got to the moonroads and then I found myself skimming more and more. The obstacles put in front of Genna seemed like the author was just sticking them in (and I was just skipping them over).

I liked the themes of loyalty, love, and sacrifice. I liked the old woman fortune teller. I liked the talking cat. I even liked the ending, but, after saying all this, I didn't like it enough to want to read the second book in the series.

Sunday, September 15, 2013

Thursday, September 12, 2013

Win a copy of Sky Jumpers!

Write on this prompt for a chance to win a free copy of Sky Jumpers!

Prompt: "Bombs Breath"

On September 22, I'll be posting a review of Sky Jumpers on my blog. For a chance to win the book, in the Comments section of that post, write using the writing prompt: "Bombs Breath" (a paragraph or two is fine)

My favorite entry will win a copy of the book

(to be mailed by the publicist).

The winner will be announced on 9-28-13.

Tip: the most unique and creative entry will be the one to catch my eye!

Why am I telling you now? To give you a head start. Write it now and paste it on Sep 22nd! Good luck winning this great book!

Sunday, September 29, 2013

A Song for Sunday - Kings & Queens