Sunday, May 8, 2011

Stuck? Ask Questions!


Ever been stuck in your writing, unsure of what comes next? That's where I was yesterday, so I decided on this exercise to help me focus.

Writing Exercise: Stuck? Use questions to help you determine where your writing needs to go. My response is below. 


Questions:
 
How will the group react when they find out who the man is?

What will D. tell Mr. B. about how they got there?

How did Mr. B. get a message from G.?

What will Mr. B tell the group to do?

What will M.D. do?

What will happen in the next chapter?

Thursday, May 5, 2011

Interview Your Antagonist

Antagonist - Person opposing the main character. The antagonist may also represent a major threat or obstacle to the main character by their very existence, without necessarily deliberately targeting him or her. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Antagonist

Writing Exercise: Focus on your antagonist today. What makes him tick? What makes him so bad? Get to know him better by interviewing him. (Yes, this should be fiction. If you can really interview your antagonist, I suggest you call 911). My response is below.

Interview of Malcolm Destrair
By Dawn M. Hamsher

DMH: Today we are speaking with Malcolm Destrair, unofficial ruler of all the lands of Traboltia. Wow! Malcolm, you are nothing like I pictured. I thought you’d have dark hair and features, but you are very much the opposite and quite good looking. Not the monster I’ve heard about.  

Malcolm: (looking amused) Hmmm…sometimes looks can be deceiving, eh?

DMH: Umm..yes, let’s get to the interview. I hear you brought down an entire kingdom?

Malcolm: Yes, what of it?

DMH: Well, that’s quite a feat. How did you do it?

Malcolm: It was easy, really. I played on their fear, confusion, and weakness. It was like taking candy from a baby. The old king was too trusting, too good. When his people turned to me, wanting new things, wanting change…Well, I just planted the idea and watched the kingdom fall.

DMH: Why didn’t you stay to rule in Traboltia’s palace?

Malcolm: I never wanted just Traboltia. I wanted bigger. I built my place up north and prey on all of the kingdom when I want something.

DMH: I’ve heard about your demons.

Malcolm: (smiles) Yes, my pets. They’ve been known to get me what I want. (He leans in) I can guarantee that you wouldn’t want to meet one on a dark night.

DMH: (feeling a little intimidated, changes the subject) Um…speaking of pets, you also have some pet animals…dogs, right?

Malcolm: (sits back up) Yes, I have three black wolfhounds. They usually go with me everywhere. Did you know that dogs are the most loyal of creatures? They’ve lived longer than some of my men.

DMH: Oh. (leans in) So, is it true that you can’t die?

Malcolm: (laughs) Several have tried. I can wager that you wouldn’t be able to kill me.

DMH: No, I wouldn’t want to. I uh, they say that the key to your longevity is in the gem that you wear around your neck.

Malcolm:  Oh, this bauble. Hm. Let’s just say that this is my good luck charm, a gift from good, old King Osiah. (sly laugh).

DMH: What about your personal life? You once had a wife?

Malcolm: (face clouds) We will not be discussing her.

DMH: Oh, sorry. OK, Um…next question. What are your future plans?

Malcolm: (relaxing) I’ve been bored lately. I’ve heard rumors that King Osiah had some riches that I didn’t know about. I intend to do some treasure hunting and no one is going to stand in my way.

DMH: No, I don’t expect they could. Thank you, Malcolm, for joining me today. Tune in next time, when we talk with Malcolm’s right hand man, Mustren.

Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Special Announcement - Published!

I just got word that one of my devotions will be published! 

"Sharing the Bible for Parental Dummies" will appear in Vista by Wesleyan Publishing House in May of 2012!

I'm so excited!

Sunday, May 1, 2011

A to Z Blogging Challenge -- Reflection Post

My reflections:

1. BLOGGING, A NEW WORLD -- This was like a door opening to a new world. I learned a lot about blogging itself (why people blog, what they blog about, etiquette, tips), which was one of my goals. I was very excited to find other writing blogs and writers that are kindred spirits!

Here is my favorite blogging tip (by Sue at Traverselife):
How to Make a Hyperlink Signature in Blogger


2. ON POSTING -- I was never stressed about posting because I did most of my posts in advance (in draft). I had a great time coming up with writing exercises, researching supporting information, and writing responses to the exercises.

3. ON VISITING -- I was stressed about visiting 1200+ blogs. I did visit them all, but did not explore each one in depth. I came back to ones that I found interesting.
Here are some of my favorites:

Lucy Adams                                                  Write With Pictures              
Pocketful of Playdough                                   Melissa T. Liban Illustrations
Encouragement for Christian Writers              Style is Not Just a Black Suit       
...then she writes                                          Writercize


4. ON "FOLLOWING" -- Since I am a new to blogging, I wasn't sure about the whole "Following" thing.
I decided to follow blogs if:

     a. I liked the content and wanted to be a regular visitor.
     b. I posted a comment on the blog (due to interesting question or funny post).
     c. I liked what the blogger had to say and wanted to encourage him/her. 

5. ON COMMENTS -- I loved the interaction through comments (on my blog and on others). My only complaint is that if you leave a comment on someone's blog, you have to return to it later to see if they responded.  Is there a widget out there or something that addresses this problem?

All, if you have any feedback on my blog, I'd love to hear it. Blessings! Dawn