Thursday, February 24, 2011

Grumble Day

Writing Exercise: Write a poem to express your mood today. If you like, follow this poem's rhyming pattern for ending words (AA, BB) for each stanza.

Grumble Day
By Dawn M. Hamsher

It is a grumble day
I'm in a depressed way

I wish I weren't working
Could lay around just shirking

But, no, I'm staring at a monitor
And my mind is beginning to wander
There are things I should be doing
But I can't seem to get moving

I have a pain in my rear end
Sitting too long, it won’t mend
I think I’d better go home to rest
I really think that would be best


  1. And that’s what I did. I slept for 4 hours and felt much better afterwards.

  2. Very cute, Dawn! Thanks for the chuckle.


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