I will be posting one poem each day of Poetry Schmoetry (July 11-14).
Life Today Vs. Life Yesterday
by Dawn M. Hamsher
Life Today
immediate
immediate gratification
immediate gratification digital
immediate gratification digital information
immediate gratification digital information public
immediate gratification digital information public communication
immediate gratification digital information public communication virtual
immediate gratification digital information public communication virtual stimulation
gradual accumulation manual publication private conversation community situation
gradual accumulation manual publication private conversation community
gradual accumulation manual publication private conversation
gradual accumulation manual publication private
gradual accumulation manual publication
gradual accumulation manual
gradual accumulation
gradual
Life Yesterday
Very cool poem, Dawn--verbally and visually. :)
ReplyDeleteWow, what a truly original concrete poem!
ReplyDeleteMy internet stalled as I was trying to post a comment, and after I was done being frustrated, I smiled thinking "immediate gratification."
I really enjoyed this poem it is very visual as a concrete poem and the words you chose match perfectly. I will be posting only one poem for this blogfest and it will go up tomorrow.
ReplyDeleteI love it! It is so wise :) I also LOVE the visual--super creative.
ReplyDeleteSuch an original poem. Definitely fits under the category of immediate gratification :)
ReplyDeleteI just posted my poem,too.
Ooooh, this is so cool! I love the visual nature of it, awesome!
ReplyDeleteOoooh, this is so cool! I love the visual nature of it, awesome!
ReplyDeletePam -- Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
ReplyDeleteJade -- ha ha, funny...immediate gratification gets us all!
Summer -- Great! I will check your poem out today.
Angie -- Oh thank you!
Lana -- Thank you. I'll come visit your poem!
Greenwoman -- Thank you so much.
Wow, that was cool!
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