Alana at Writercize has a Weekend Challenge: New Endings, where you write a different ending to a popular fairy tale.
Here's my entry:
Hansel and Gretel – The Real Ending
Source: thewondrous.com |
Gretel did indeed trick the old witch at her own game. She slammed
the witch in the oven when she was showing Gretel how to stoke the fire that
would soon cook Hansel. When the witch’s screams stopped, Gretel let Hansel
out of his cage. They searched the hag’s gingerbread home and found a small stash
of rubies and emeralds, a fortune that would buy them all the food they’d ever
need in this land of famine.
Then the two sat down to decide what to do. They could go
back to their father, the woodcutter’s home, but even if their nasty
step-mother were still alive, they would have to live with the fact that their
father had abandoned them to die in the forest. No. They decided it would be
better to make their own way in the world.
They lived in the old hag’s cottage until they were grown
and then, selling some of their jewels, they set out together to find suitable marriages.
Hansel married a fine woman who cooked him the richest of
foods. He was plump and happy the rest of his life. Gretel married the town’s confectioner
(for the famine was no longer in the land) and helped him in the shop. The one
thing though, that she refused to let him sell was gingerbread. Of that, she
could not abide.
A new ending to a popular tale - what fun! I'm glad they didn't go back home. They must have had their heads on straight, unlike their parents.
ReplyDeleteMichelle, Thanks for commenting!
ReplyDeleteI love how both marriages really boil down to the food - isn't that the truth for a happy marriage?! Thank you so much for doing this Dawn - I hope you can join this weekend too! :)
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